User blog comment:XYZexal/Omni Evolution Lore: Feeva/@comment-27362456-20160807023328

The start was good, but it got too specific. It would have sounded better if you said something along the lines of "If Feeva had managed to rally the rest of the 6 Pillars they would have been able to prevent the high ranking God from sealing them away.  Had they joined forces and escaped the barrier they would have most likely hunted down their former masters and restored order in the world.