User blog comment:The Zero of Faram/Guardians' Peril: Chapter 6/@comment-26403279-20150808002949

Hey, its been a long time again. (So much anxiety from me!!! I know Rina's not going to get a 7*, but I just want it to be over!!!! :,((....) I can see the openings here. Just make sure that it doesn't always go, 'Person X is moody, and then Person Y responded in like, but just as bad. Both fight. Then Person Z enters and yells at them both, and X and Y both feel bad'. Also, careful of the reasons. I'm a little confused. Farlon's last sentence really just says everything he really means: "I'm really just this angry because Lunaris didn't do anything about my problems and relationship with her". On Rayden's side, ok... People have flaws, that's the way they are. Example: your girlfriend Ramna is lazy. She doesn't really do anything. She's only here because she wants to be with you. NOW SHE'S A REALLY HORRIBLE PARASICTIC GIRLFRIEND, IT'S HER FAULT YOU'RE BECOMING THIS WAY.

Point is, everyone (or rather, every guy, since there hasn't been anyone else talked about in detail besides Orphelia and she only talks about her villiage) is always blowing up over nothing. Also, I'm quite a bit more than little peeved that females in this story seem to have no other role than cooking. And cleaning. While the guys always have these fights just because they're lazy, angry. and bored, and end up getting little more than a slap on the wrist. If there's a reason for this, like the gods are purposely messing with their heads and targeted the males, then you're going on too long without one.