User blog comment:Carol of the bells/Days of Ruin --- Zen's exile part 3/@comment-25002135-20150115053244

Now that I've read 3 chapters, I think I have a decent understanding of how you interpret things. So feel free to disregard everything I said about 'units' xD

Needless to say, the way you interpreted how the game mechanics to work in the story is actually quite interesting. Personally, when I write I prefer to ignore some (not all, of course) mechanics of the game in favor of a bit of more realism, but this method works quite well too.

One question I have: Why is the rest of the family (barring Ko, probably) just sitting around doing nothing? Shouldn't they also be training to grow stronger as to not shame the family name?

Still, the interactions done between characters is well done, so keep up the good work.