User blog comment:The Zero of Faram/Guardians' Peril: Chapter 3/@comment-26403279-20150526204511/@comment-26403279-20150528015954

Nope, you're good in that department. It was just a warning. You know, sometimes where something you say might accidentally conflict with something else that should have also happened- most commonly happening with slip ups in time. This game isn't very time specific, but in other stories, readers might go: but wait, shouldn't [character] be passing through at that moment? Or wasn't there a battle in between this and so and so? Or messed up locations/people/roles. You have a very minor one: how old is Mia now? Alyut said she looked twelve; she states herself as eight? It isn't that bad, but four year difference in a child is a bit strong.