User blog comment:Carol of the bells/Days of Ruin --- Zen's exile, part 6/@comment-124.66.154.62-20141107054630

Read all your story from the beginning. Interesting plot, keep up the good work!

Only thing to highlight is your English. I am not saying your English is bad. It's just riddled with spelling and grammar mistakes. All this can be easily rectified by using Microsoft Words spellcheck.

So.. why don't you create a draft on Microsoft Words, do a spellcheck, before you copy and paste the content and submit.

That would make it easier for us to read. :)