Thread:Galeforce's Wrath/@comment-26053138-20150312232650/@comment-24927152-20150412185814

Nevermind, I re-read the story, and now everything makes sense XD

But, I think the part where Alyut and Ophelia were talking could use a tad bit more detail, since I had to read it a few times to understand it.

Or.... that could just be that im not reading the story right?