User blog comment:Zennyu/Zelathon Global Exclusive Unit Series: Zelathonian Guardians/@comment-31049366-20170712004413/@comment-28589973-20170712030835

The lore for Iorek is good however I would like you to make sure to put things about Iorek's personal life because I feel like most of the time the lore is about someone else instead of the actual unit. However I did like the reference to the God Army.

You did a good job on Sherafin's lore it talks about her family and what position she is in the guild. It also may hint to future units which is nice. The only bad part I can find is the overused do this or else cliche and Serafin's name is spelled wrong (Srafin). GJ

Kaiyasa's lore, not going to lie, it's pretty bad. It barely talks about Kaiyasa aside for her position for the guild and it talks about how she almost kills someone. I felt like if you avoided that scene and talked about her friendship with Kaiyasa it would be better

-Peteroid...