User blog comment:Carol of the bells/Days of Ruin --- Zen's exile, part 8/@comment-25635732-20141114015005

Was the scene in the middle a flashback scene? I got a little confused. Anyway, remember me? I'm the rookie author :P.

Oohh, Zen's finally opening up to her units! So her brothers are still on the hunt... Whatever Ko's planning doesn't sound good. But man, the character development was kinda quick for someone who has pride in herself. I'm not saying anything bad about it, but it kinda seems rushed to me. Then again, better than reading five chapters about it ;)

Overall, I like your pace of this story! You should definitely post this on fanfiction.com! I would definitely follow your story ;)

Awesome job and keep it