User blog comment:NayrianKnight/The Dragonborn and the Swords - Part 1/@comment-25635732-20141228202649

Hmm... Leo, back to chat. I need to talk to you about this.

Well, for one great start, but to be honest, I think you can space out some parts to begin with a new paragraph like "For many years" but it might just be me who's unable to read a wall of text :P

And I wanna say you can capitalize dragonborn since, you know, but... I don't know.

Still, great start anyway!