User blog comment:TomoMe/Relation Complex (Story)/@comment-25002135-20140603070059

So, I've read through the 3 chapters that are out so far, and I have to say I like it so far.

Having a unique presentation of the story was refreshing for me, too.

One thing, though, the mistakes here and there made it kind of hard for me to read at times, so maybe you could get someone to help you edit? I don't mind, but I don't think I'm the greatest of editors, lol.

Anyway, good job so far. Keep up the good work!