Thread:NayrianKnight/@comment-25635732-20141116231018

Well, first off, thanks for complimenting about my characters. Kinda weird how I'm on your follow list.

Anyway, a little advice for you before you start your story is, be creative! Be warned: I am a little harsh when people try to make stories based on a game like brave frontier. Here's an example.

First off, be a little realistic about fights. Fights, action, and the pace of the story are the most imortant things I will pay attention to. Turn based fights are a no no for me, it takes away the action ;) Drama is fine but don't make it too dramatic, or else the emotion will go over the reader's head. I've done this before when reading other people's stories.

Secondly, be creative about the RS summon. I've seen how people try to incorprate it and it irked me, a lot. Have him encounter them along the way or something like that. Oh well, the way your story will go is up to you, I'm just providing advice.

Good luck on your story! 