User blog comment:Carol of the bells/Days of Ruin --- Foregoing Affairs, part 3/@comment-26926725-20150917013917

I have to say, I'd like to see more plot to it but it's good nonetheless. I write different pieces of work (lore and will do stories later), but I like this kind of stuff too. I noticed something in the work: you wrote in first person point of view, then switched to third person omniscent,  (narrator not in story, but knows thats on everyone's mind.) and that just kinda bugs me a little. But keep up the good work!