Thread:Galeforce's Wrath/@comment-26053138-20150312232650/@comment-24927152-20150412183437

that ending made me have some VERY negative thoughts about radyn :O

anyways, this was great! a few grammatical/spelling errors here-and-there, but otherwise it was great! In my opinion, the explanation at the start was a bit weird (no offense) for the fanfic. Just don't indent (put a space) at the beginning of a line and those scrolls wont show up. otherwise.... 7/10 (for imperfections)