User blog comment:Carol of the bells/Days of Ruin --- Zen's exile, part 36/@comment-25002135-20150214222843

Well, seems like I finally caught up. Took me a while, huh?

I do have some thoughts and predictions on where this story could go, but I won't mention them here. You did drop a lot of hints here and there, especially with Hisagi and Ko acting as they do.

I did, however, like the method of introducing Zen as the main character into the brave frontier storyline. On the other hand, now that you're following the game's story, it might be a bit harder to branch out to other things. Well, then again I guess it's possible to have Zen grow strong enough to resolve the issues within her family before the BF storyline is over  (is that ever going to happen?), but I honestly don't see that as very likely the way the BF storyline is going currently.

Reading your current chapter though, I can say now that you've improved since you've first started, though. Still some typos here and there, perhaps some grammatical errors—some readers might not care so much about these things, but I still think it would be better if those could be fixed. At least it's not jarring enough to make some readers leave, imo.

Of course, proofreading your own work can be a bit difficult, especially with the update schedule you seem to try to uphold. Have you thought of getting a proofreader? I think that would help a lot. I don't mind proofreading, but I don't consider myself to be that good.

Anyway, keep up the good work. I'm sure we all know you're busy with school and life, so if there are times where you can't update as often as you would like, I'm sure your readers would understand. Just try not to take too long of a break, because that can lead to complete loss of motivation to work on the story. :P