User blog comment:Carol of the bells/Days of Ruin --- Zen's exile, part 58: End/@comment-25002135-20151130015626

Hmm, so the story is finally over. Alot has happened since it first started, huh? It must have been quite the journey.

To be honest, on one hand the ending felt a little abrupt, but on the other hand I also think it might be fine as it is. Well, being unable to point out exactly what's bothering me, no matter how slight it is, just shows my immaturity as a writer, I guess. But I also could be wrong and that there's really nothing all that wrong with what you wrote, lol.

Either way, keep up the good work! I'm really looking forward to Chasing Pandora and the new characters, plot, and interactions you'll be introducing there.