User blog comment:Carol of the bells/Crossover story --- Grey vs Zen/@comment-25635732-20141130050720

Sorryyyyy! My brother had to do something important with his laptop so I had to wait... and I got this chance... Sorry!

For the most part, you got his skills down. I think Grey wouldn't immediately snap when Zeln called him an albino (darn it Zeln, blame lineage not him), but you said it'd be funny for plot conveniences... Leave it to Zeln to screw things up :P

Anyway, you did great for your first try! Keep up your amazing stories :)

P.S. Wait till you hear that in my story, Ariel is the one who took down three of the four fallen gods and many more that tried to stop her. Of course, Grey helped her out but most of the time, she's forced to go solo ;) And yet another thing to add on his dislikes list: never call him an albino.