User blog comment:The Zero of Faram/Guardians' Peril: Chapter 3/@comment-26403279-20150526204511/@comment-26053138-20150527195442

Really? This was good? I agree but this was worse than the second chapter. I can never seem to do better. Damn deadline was the worst possible choice for a story that takes long to write. I will make this story better. I'm working already. Mia's up next and I won't disappoint. I will work on development on Daniel mostly as he will be going through some stuff. Wait for it since next week is my schools last week. I will make you and everyone proud!