User blog comment:Selena & Lexida/Chapter 1 & 2. I re worked Chapter one a Little bit And tell me if i need to fix anything for Chapter 2 !/@comment-26053138-20150418201646

You Didn't need to fit three chapters into the first one. Or it may be me looking at it funny because my days of writing in text conversation format are of the past but maybe if only I hadn't lost the chapters to Reaper's Troubles, Then it would seem more familiar. Anyway, follow what Nayrian Said because It's good and very interesting but errors are plentiful. Also play around with the length of these chapters to what you see fit. Keep writing :D