User blog comment:KKytes/Earth Vortex Arena/@comment-32794100-20170929065044

As what @Bf collector said about reviews (even though I don't want to), I don't think I have much choices but to see it by myself... And in my opinion bout your scoring... Yes, I think it's not that great... To be honest, you could do better and I believe it. Here's what I have in my mind right now:

1. Fix the Omni+ about Elemental Paradigm and Spark Cross first, the explanation is all wrong. Resonance already made when Omni Rarity is made which is like 2 years ago, while Elemental Paradigm is another side of story that made by Global. Here's what you said in the description:

"Within the Omni+ update, a special little known buff called "Resonance" was added."

See? Omni+ reference... It's not from Omni+, once again it's from the moment when all Six Heroes released their OE Rarity which is like the first OE ever before the new crazed meta.

2. As what my No.1 already said to you, Fei and Feng's description also need to be change. Fei and Fang can't activate Elemental Paradigm, Elemental Paradigm was achieved when 3 OE+ Unit in the same squad and it had to be in the same Element. While Resonance is called as Spark Cross and it's the correct terms when 150% Damage is sync between units and the effect was pretty much like Elemental Paradigm which is counted by the same Element of Unit within the same squad. However, the differences is, Elemental Paradigm isn't limited but working passively and continuously from the start of the battle WHEN you have at least 3 Unit that has the same Elemental and Rarity of OE+ that was right.

3. You could add some separation stuff between Units to making it detailed and precisely accurate, like this:

LS (XX/XX): Description of it about that Unit's LS

ES (XX/XX): Description of it about that Unit's ES

and etc with the last review, like this:

Overall:

-

Cons:

-

Pro:

-

That way we can totally see one part to another without getting confused... Of course try to keep it to the main topic which is VA Guide so your review is all about them in VA and not their fullest potential.