User blog comment:The Zero of Faram/Guardian's Peril:Chapter 1/@comment-25594722-20150415125741

A few things. First, it's canon, not cannon. Second, it's REALLY bulky, try breaking it down to maybe 2 or 3 chapters per character, just to make it easier to read. Third, try to keep intros/outros short and sweet. And last, keep up this interesting story.