User blog comment:Carol of the bells/Days of Ruin --- Zen's exile, part 58: End/@comment-25002135-20151130015626/@comment-25002135-20151130054611

No, I'm pretty sure I shouldn't be afraid of pointing things out. xD Although, I do have to understand what's wrong before I can give any meaningful input.

I guess I'll read this chapter over again more carefully when I have time and see if I still notice what was bothering me. But first, I have so much work to get done >.<